History Essay 點樣可以寫好d?⁣⁣


⁣⁣【想睇曬全文就撳文章標題啦】相信好多同學都有同一個疑問,等我講下essay點樣可以寫好d先~


⭐️判題⁣⁣

題型係最緊要嘅,因為唔同題型有唔同嘅要求,判錯題就gg。見到essay第一時間係判題,睇下佢究竟係以下邊一款題型:⁣⁣

1)直述 (直接叫你講述一d野,唔需要揀立場,例如trace and explain,describe the features,explain why… etc)➡️不需駁論⁣⁣

2)兩極化 (一個yes no question,eg to what extent was china modernised by 1911)➡️ 要揀立場,不需駁論,無論題目有冇「to what extent」你都可以用「to a large/small extent」黎作答黎cover曬兩邊嘅points (係得少部分題目唔可以用to a ______ extent,總之你感覺呢一題有to__extent 嘅答案會好奇怪好唔合邏輯就唔得),但係如果你用呢個方法,你一定要cover曬兩個立場之餘都要喺最後果段解釋立場,即係解釋點解你會話large/small extent…,例如:Although Japan was not modernized in the social aspect in the 1920s, it was modernized in most aspects like the political, economic and military aspects. Therefore, overall speaking, Japan was largely modernized by the 1920s⁣⁣

3)一果多因 (即係題目俾左一個fact你,問你某一樣野係咪「主」因,例如was …PRIMARILY causedby…?was xx the most importang factor in causing YYY?To what extent was ABC caused by DEF?etc ➡️咁呢個就係有立場同埋要駁論嘅題型,要提出其他因素再駁番佢)⁣⁣
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睇完係1/2/3之後就要睇下有冇涉及比較 (1&2有機會同時要比較)(要比較嘅題目嘅例子:more xx than,turning point,fundamental change,compare… etc),有涉及比較嘅話一定要成篇都有比較,唔好淨係一兩段有。⁣⁣
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同埋睇下佢係A)單問題 定係 B)雙問題 (即係話題目有兩部分要你答,eg 「was __(noun)a xxx rather than yyy」要答曬係咪xxx同埋係咪yyy,兩者缺一不可。Although FFF,GGG。咁FFF同GGG你都要答,唔好只係答GGG)⁣⁣
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判斷左個題型之後你就要跟番每個題型嘅要求做。⁣⁣
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PS有補kw嘅可以睇返佢notes嘅判題簡表⁣⁣
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⭐️課文⁣⁣

正如我之前FAQ1果個post所講,溫課文好重要,因為好多points你都可以直接擺落去⁣⁣
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⭐️靈活運用facts,多角度思考⁣⁣

有好多facts其實係可以用喺唔同地方或者唔同立場,去證明唔同嘅points,所以最重要真係要由唔同角度諗野,諗下每一個論據可以用喺邊d唔同嘅地方⁣⁣
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eg袁世凱稱帝、張勳復辟:可以用黎證明舊思想仲存在,中國人仲未明白共和體制嘅重要性,又可以用佢地嘅失敗黎話monarchy已經係逆潮流,共和係大勢所趨⁣⁣
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eg 單單係一個munich conference 1938可以證明 1)英法錯誤估計形勢,以為hitler攞左sudetenland就會滿足,於是用appeasement policy 2)hitler carried out an expansionist policy/ carried out aggressions 3)hitler想尋求living space,所以佢唔會遵守約定,就算講左話有sudetenland之後唔會再入侵czech 佢之後都係入侵左成個czech 4)法國明明同czech簽左mutual assistance嘅合約,佢都依然犧牲左czech嘅利益黎換取短暫嘅和平 5)USSR 因為munich conference 之中英法嘅行為,覺得英法特登drive the troubles towards the east,變相encourage germany attack ussr,懷疑英法係想借germany之手消滅ussr所以ussr 對英法呢d capitalist countries嘅suspicions增加左,為cold war埋下伏線 6)冇左sudetenland之後czech失去左天然嘅屏障,所以hitler好快就可以成功occupy czech 7)czech再東d就係poland,再之後就係ussr,ussr為避免俾germany攻擊(同埋ussr唔信英法)就同germany簽 nazi Soviet mon aggression pact⁣⁣

!!!!駁論思維:多d諗點解一個factor 重要過另一個,或者你可以點樣做駁論, 例如for factors causing ww2,如果你想講 ww1遺留嘅問題重要過great depression, 咁你就講係ww1導致果d國家rely on美國嘅經濟,例如因為germany ww1之後好弱,美國用Dawes plan, young plan借錢俾 佢,正正因為咁,Wall Street stock crash 喺全球引起嘅chain reaction先咁大件事, enable左great depression嘅發生,導致 hitler嘅崛起。如果你話great depression重要d,咁可以話1920s係honeymoon period,氣氛和平,即係ww1之後都有10年左右嘅和平時間,但係就係1929great depression先令 hitler rise to power同埋令mussolini重新開始佢嘅aggressions,改變左原本和平嘅氣氛,導致ww2

⭐️論述飽滿、清晰,有重點
唔可以空泛!一定要有例子/數據證明! elaborate得清楚d,唔好冗長、俾勁多 details同eg但係人地讀完都唔知你up乜或者唔知你個point係咩!一定要有重點!!

⭐️結構
文章結構都要好清晰,intro可以短但係唔可以冇,最好include埋你之後D points/ cover嘅角度。每一段topic sentence講清楚係咩aspect同埋你個point。每一段最後都要個concluding statement,講turning point就每一段講清楚before,during, after,然後做對比。講係咪modernised就每一段要比左果個 aspect modernised 嘅定義先,再講果個國家果陣嘅情況符唔符合你個定義。做一果多因嘅時候記住寫過渡段,例如Although xx was the most important factor in causing yy, there were also other factors which where less important。做兩極化而且用extent答嘅話就記得寫個精準嘅過渡段,例如:although japan was modernized in xxxxx aspects, it was not modernized in a few aspects。總之,你一 定要做到marker一睇就知你想講乜, marker-friendly d自然高分d

⭐️refIection/睇5**範文/suggested answer

如果你仲未知點解你essay永遠都突破唔到某個分,你要諗下點解,例如睇返過去嘅 test同功課睇下有冇d mistake你成日都犯左嘅,或者問下老師你嘅弱點喺邊,最好就係攞5**嘅答案/suggested answer同你自己嘅答案做對比,等你知道人地點解高分、你仲差d咩

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